The editing was good, with a good use of varying transitions and the editing is done in a way that makes the meaning apparent to the audience.
Some of the shots were noticeably unsteady. Also, the footage used for the shot that follows the protagonist was very shaky which was apparent when the footage was sped up. This shot could be shortened to make the shot less shaky.
-Very good use of shot framing with all appropriate characters and props on screen -Appropriate use of sound which complements the editing -Questionable use of transitions in first scene -Time lapse of walking seemed to fill time rather than generate further meaning -Unsure of the meaning of 'The Magazine'
- Good use of appropriate sound (parallel to imagery). - there was a good use of props which suggested meaning, for example; the blanket to show being homeless -
-the soundtracks fitted well -varied shot angles -variations of foley's to exaggerate situations -unclear shots in the darker room -camera movement was quite scatty -the storyline was a bit confusing, but also good use of elipsis
The editing was good, with a good use of varying transitions and the editing is done in a way that makes the meaning apparent to the audience.
ReplyDeleteSome of the shots were noticeably unsteady. Also, the footage used for the shot that follows the protagonist was very shaky which was apparent when the footage was sped up. This shot could be shortened to make the shot less shaky.
-Very good use of shot framing with all appropriate characters and props on screen
ReplyDelete-Appropriate use of sound which complements the editing
-Questionable use of transitions in first scene
-Time lapse of walking seemed to fill time rather than generate further meaning
-Unsure of the meaning of 'The Magazine'
- Good use of appropriate sound (parallel to imagery).
ReplyDelete- there was a good use of props which suggested meaning, for example; the blanket to show being homeless
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-the soundtracks fitted well
ReplyDelete-varied shot angles
-variations of foley's to exaggerate situations
-unclear shots in the darker room
-camera movement was quite scatty
-the storyline was a bit confusing, but also good use of elipsis